Hi and welcome to my blog. I'm in Totara 2 and my teacher is Miss Hines. We're a class of Year 7 and 8 students in Totara at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
My name is Nazella and I am a year 8 at Panmure Bridge School. This is an incredible DLO which stands out. I really like how you added arrows to show what they are saying next. I also love how you added pictures of a dinosaur and a cow. Maybe next time you could add the English subtitles underneath the Maori so we could understand what it says. But either than that, you have made an awesome DLO which looks really clear. Are you still blogging? Keep it up.
Kia ora Alexander I liked your ‘cow meets dinosaur’ and how you put the words in te reo Maori. It's cool how you use speech bubbles instead of text boxes.
My name is Mataio I am a year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School. This is a great DLO. I really like the characters you used and the arrows pointing down at the characters so we know which way the conversation is going. Next time you could and English subtitles underneath the Maori words so people who aren't Maori would understand what the characters in your DLO are saying. Do you remember when my teacher Mrs. Anderson came to your school a few weeks ago?
Hi Alexander,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Nazella and I am a year 8 at Panmure Bridge School. This is an incredible DLO which stands out. I really like how you added arrows to show what they are saying next. I also love how you added pictures of a dinosaur and a cow. Maybe next time you could add the English subtitles underneath the Maori so we could understand what it says. But either than that, you have made an awesome DLO which looks really clear. Are you still blogging? Keep it up.
Kia ora Alexander
ReplyDeleteI liked your ‘cow meets dinosaur’ and how you put the words in te reo Maori. It's cool how you use speech bubbles instead of text boxes.
Talofa Lava Alexander
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mataio I am a year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School. This is a great DLO. I really like the characters you used and the arrows pointing down at the characters so we know which way the conversation is going. Next time you could and English subtitles underneath the Maori words so people who aren't Maori would understand what the characters in your DLO are saying. Do you remember when my teacher Mrs. Anderson came to your school a few weeks ago?